Dear my good friend eraser
Always sacrifice your body for me
Dear my kind friend eraser.
Always helping me like a my kind teacher
you can jump like a happy bunny
you can run away like a mad car
you can hide like a small bird
that I always lost you everytime
Sometimes I punched you with my sharp pencil
Sometimes I make you pain with me hand
Sometimes I make you hurt with my fingernail which is sharp as a needle
Sorry for everything that I'd done to you , my good friend
Dear my great friend eraser
I 'll always cherish you.
I feel sorry for you when I saw your dirty body and face
Dear my wonderful friend eraser
I'll always care of you , Dear my friend eraser.
Hyun Jung, you are such a bad friend to eraser! You personified eraser and developed well into an ode by praising its suffering that eraser had to put up with. Despite the repetition of phrases, it is well written ode. Good job. -TA Hyebin
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