Hello! I'm Catherine wang and today I'll going to write about narrative essay.
Experience new thing is exciting but nervous. For me, the most exciting experience was
the first time that I went on stage for speech contest . I went to a Englishcamp called
Sung Sil university camp. The Sung Sil university's auditorium was so big thatI can hardly
see a back side of the auditorium. When I was a third grade (Korean age), I
was having a big confidence of my self. I was thinking that I was a super girl and I was
thinking that I can do anything that I want. At winter vacation , I went to a sung sil university
camp. I really wanted to be on speech contest. I was full of passion in my mind. I went
to home and I practice a speech contest. I was doing a really hard on speech contest
even my older brother said : YOU 'RE A WORKAHOLIC!!! Anyway I dreamed about the
picture that I was standing on a stage, giving my speech very nicely.
Next day, my native teacher Miss Christina asked to our class about the speaker of the
speach contest. I raised my hand very straight to show Miss Christina that I'm really want t
to be a speaker. Every students gave a speech to our class to choose who will going to b
e out in speech contest. I very nervous because every did a great job. At that time I was
praying to god. Finally , the whole speeches were finished. Then than Miss Christina told
the representative speaker of speech contest. It was me!!! I was reall~~y happy. I was
looked like a crazy monkey who got a full of bananas.
It was the speech contest day. I was waiting at the front of the speech , practicing my
speech paper. The announcer say my name and I was on the stage. I felt like 1000 of eyes
was looking straight at me. I chew my mouth and it was bleeding. I pulled myself together
and start my speech. I chose three people and looked them around. Everyone was
listening to me. I tried to talk like that I 'm having a conversation with the audience and my
speech was finally end. My heart was pumping like a mad lion. My first experience on
stage was really cool , fantastic , wonderful and make me happy.
My first experience on stage was really good. But it was also scary and made me
paralyzed. This experience taught me that having a passion is very important.
I can be on stage because I had a passion about my self. Once again I learned that
having a passion is very good .
Catherine,
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I thought you did a good job in narrating your experience by having a good structure and interesting actions and desctiptions. Watch out for grammatical (use of tenses) and spelling errors.